tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post8510240747193403831..comments2023-05-02T13:05:11.110+05:30Comments on I wanna love my life: Distance between the smiles...Puneethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11166951839849157435noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-86833203726456698702010-01-24T15:08:31.532+05:302010-01-24T15:08:31.532+05:30Beautifully written. If it's based on a true e...Beautifully written. If it's based on a true event; is this the girl who thought you had longs arms? :PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-36494762894366877562009-08-27T10:52:49.247+05:302009-08-27T10:52:49.247+05:30Lovely writing.. came through indiblogger & vo...Lovely writing.. came through indiblogger & voted for you :)<br />All the best .. !!Gomathy Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06084827272973491033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-12411930157396149322009-08-07T22:16:22.566+05:302009-08-07T22:16:22.566+05:30Where are u dude.. we're waiting for the next ...Where are u dude.. we're waiting for the next post..jashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441766305873638410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-80615770243024363642009-08-04T14:06:09.577+05:302009-08-04T14:06:09.577+05:30This actually happened to you??? it is soo touhing...This actually happened to you??? it is soo touhing and it is beautifully written..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-5680067757534534582009-07-12T09:18:25.321+05:302009-07-12T09:18:25.321+05:30hey..
so sweet and cute one..
this happened with u...hey..<br />so sweet and cute one..<br />this happened with u/? or its a fiction?<br />by d way.. whtever it is. . <br />liked it.. as such no story..but still u described it in such a way it makes ppl keep on reading.. <br /><br />take care.. :)SAHITYIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04679315164213973593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-20403621092863545012009-06-22T11:48:08.138+05:302009-06-22T11:48:08.138+05:30hey? fact or fiction? irrespective of that, lovely...hey? fact or fiction? irrespective of that, lovely narration, great description, a sweet story of college crushes :)<br />so u'r a story teller! :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16468241676629922808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-89685107716658216442009-06-17T22:36:00.522+05:302009-06-17T22:36:00.522+05:30gr8!!...u pen ur life....u live ur words...gr8!!...u pen ur life....u live ur words...Mihirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02695707517412085008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-42797219506696651342009-06-07T13:55:44.507+05:302009-06-07T13:55:44.507+05:30This is lovely. What can I say? Sometimes I'm ...This is lovely. What can I say? Sometimes I'm a sucker for romance fiction. Although I doubt it is 100% uninspired from real life incidents.Starbucknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-9074799584747564442009-06-07T01:23:13.953+05:302009-06-07T01:23:13.953+05:30So, continuing with the story..
ok, so the bansal ...So, continuing with the story..<br />ok, so the bansal people found out that he had left and mr. bansal personally phoned his home.. but he refused to come.. saying ki ab woh sir se aankhein nahi mila sakega.. but that wasn't the real reason.. now was it.. So he was really down and out and his father had a talk with him.. aur kaha ki uss ladki ko apni himmat banao.. kamzori nahi.. and then what else, he worked hard.. bam boom he was AIR 76. the girl got AIR 2000something<br />ANyway, so the day the results were declared, he went to bc and found out the girl's home address, went to her home, and gave her another card.. said a bunch of emotional stuff. and well they got together..<br />so, as far as i had thought, u know..was to throw another friend who is a girl when he goes back to his town who develops feelings for him.. and she is basically who he starts to confide in when all his other friends don't really give a damn..<br />and basically this story is being told to the author at the couple's wedding by anand, but we dont know who the bride is till the end.. its the girl he liked in the start only.<br />ask me anything u want abt this and awaiting what u think of the story's potential..jashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441766305873638410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-32284116380278128082009-06-06T18:57:12.086+05:302009-06-06T18:57:12.086+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.falconhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09273184008012524374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-82768817352099754812009-06-06T18:57:09.773+05:302009-06-06T18:57:09.773+05:30I refuse to believe that this story of urs is pure...I refuse to believe that this story of urs is pure fiction. even if it may not be based on true incident.. it is something that is truly inspired by .. let's say a hope..of her coming to station etc..falconhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09273184008012524374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-32882032410184227222009-06-05T23:36:17.477+05:302009-06-05T23:36:17.477+05:30THAT was a very convincing story.
Is this comple...THAT was a very convincing story. <br /><br />Is this completely imaginary? And I think you put a lot into this. A wholesome short story. Good work! :)<br /><br />Nice wordplay sprinkled in. From the heading to the ending. Looking forward to more stuff like this.Asmi Saxenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17768866617044193146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-70061781001407556492009-06-04T21:13:41.660+05:302009-06-04T21:13:41.660+05:30Have you ever considered writing a novel.. cuz i&#...Have you ever considered writing a novel.. cuz i've got a story for u..jashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441766305873638410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-37705723581188813432009-06-04T15:17:51.380+05:302009-06-04T15:17:51.380+05:30Its beautiful.Its beautiful.Sowmya.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05644399672463790526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-10075183219266466032009-06-04T15:11:24.440+05:302009-06-04T15:11:24.440+05:30This happened with you and this is very evident.
I...This happened with you and this is very evident.<br />It was not even a meeting but such things leave an impression.<br />The words mirrored the guys feeling and somewhere his helplessness too.<br />Written well and done justice with.<br /><br />PS: It isn't bad writing a romantic post once in a while :)Aadyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15027034472803272657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2939018150714282399.post-78324074470883105772009-06-04T03:14:33.312+05:302009-06-04T03:14:33.312+05:30well.. you were right... this is not my type of ge...well.. you were right... this is not my type of genre...so i cant really say i enjoyed it but it was very well written... the sentences were to the point and you described the guy feelings pretty well though i dont know why the guy couldnt meet love of his life infront of his dad... it was a long post but you managed to get me read it in one go... thats impressive enough...<br /><br />but seriously stop writting such love stories... it makes you sound like a girl... use your way of writting in someother genre...Acidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331286782859327239noreply@blogger.com